Thank you all for your comments on my last post! Things are getting better.
This was my 2nd painting today. The first attempt just wasn’t working out. Here is the critique I wrote on the back:
I fixed the drawing. I think I’m getting closer. Making the shadow a different color was a bad idea. I used layering techniques from “Expressive Painting” by Anne-Marie Esson. Didn’t mix my color correctly from the start. My white reflection spots look silly.
I am going to attempt this same drawing tomorrow using the Expressive painting technique from the beginning.
I actually tweaked my drawing again tonight. I think I’ve finally got it!!